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How different is North Korea from South Korea nowadays? Explain your answer.

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First of all, North Korea and South Korea have different political ideologies.
Communism in North Korea, democracy in South Korea.
Because of such different ideologies, we have developed in different ways in all aspects of
society, economy, politics and culture.
The biggest different between North Korea and South Korea is GDP of each country.
I heard on the news that North Koreans are suffering from food shortages.
On the other hand, South Korea recently ranked 10th in the world for GDP.

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First of all, North Korea and South Korea have different political ideologies.
>> CORRECT

Communism in North Korea, democracy in South Korea.
>> There is communism in North Korea and South Korea has democracy. 

Because of such different ideologies, we have developed in different ways in all aspects of 
society, economy, politics and culture.
>> CORRECT

The biggest different between North Korea and South Korea is GDP of each country.
>> The biggest difference between North Korea and South Korea is the GDP of each country.

I heard on the news that North Koreans are suffering from food shortages.
>> CORRECT

On the other hand, South Korea recently ranked 10th in the world for GDP.
>> CORRECT
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