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How different is North Korea from South Korea nowadays? Explain your answer.

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Before, North and South Korea were very similar, but now, they are very different.
The biggest difference is English.
In South Korea, a lot of people learn English and some of words are made of English, but North doesn't.
And also the pronunciation of North and South Korea is very different.
North Korea give an accent a lot but South doesn't do that.
Also North Korea make goods by themselves but South usually import.

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Before, North and South Korea were very similar, but now, they are very different.
>> CORRECT

The biggest difference is English.
>> CORRECT

In South Korea, a lot of people learn English and some of words are made of English, but North doesn't.
>> In South Korea, a lot of people learn English and some of words are derived from English, but in North Kore, it's not.

And also the pronunciation of North and South Korea is very different.
>> And also the pronunciation of the language in North and South Korea is very different.

North Korea give an accent a lot but South doesn't do that.
>> North Koreans have an accent but South Korean don't. 

Also North Korea make goods by themselves but South usually import.
>> Also North Koreans make their goods by themselves but South Koreans usually import them. 

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