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I imagine that robots can take over the world one day. Because these days, robots gradually develop smarter than before. They can think anything like people. Therefore, in my opinion, government should control to use robots in the future.

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Hello Sally!
Thank you for being diligent in doing your homework.
Keep up the good work!
Always,
~Kelly^^
I imagine that robots can take over the world one day.
>> Correct.
Because these days, robots gradually develop smarter than before.
>> Correct.
They can think anything like people.
>> They can think like people.
Therefore, in my opinion, government should control to use robots in the future.
>> Therefore, in my opinion, the government should control the use of robots in the future.   
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