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When I travel, I prefer to go to a place where there are few people. In my personal perspective, I am too tired at being with many people, since my hospital is always full of patients. Therefore, if there are a lot of people, I would be easily tired by just standing with them and could not take my time enough. Then I would not be able to wholly enjoy that place. It also takes longer time to look around the place, and if there are any limited number of things, I might not be able to get it because of many people. For example, if the place has a really famous restaurant, most of visitors would like to go there, then waiting time would be longer or the prepared ingredients might be depleted.

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Hello, Vicky!

I totally agree with you on this. It's actually better to travel with much lesser people around the place because if it's too crowded, you don't get to enjoy everything that much. Well, I hope you can travel and relax very soon.

Have a nice weekend!

~T. Roanne ^_^

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When I travel, I prefer to go to a place where there are few people. 
>> Correct! 
In my personal perspective, I am too tired at being with many people, since my hospital is always full of patients. 
>>In my personal perspective, I am too tired of being with many people, since my hospital is always full of patients. 
Therefore, if there are a lot of people, I would be easily tired by just standing with them and could not take my time enough. 
>>Therefore, if there are a lot of people, I would be easily tired of just standing with them and could not take my time enough.
Then I would not be able to wholly enjoy that place. 
>> Correct! 
It also takes longer time to look around the place, and if there are any limited number of things, I might not be able to get it because of many people. 
>> Correct! 
For example, if the place has a really famous restaurant, most of visitors would like to go there, then waiting time would be longer or the prepared ingredients might be depleted.
>> Correct! 
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