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Late and absent in work

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I had been late in work, it had open missed
the commuter bus of the company and
waked up too late in the morning sometimes.
I had also been absent, it got my home problems and
very tired of my health conditions.

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Hello there Jin!

Nice to see you here on the composition page again! All of us had been late or absent for work because of unforseen circumstances. At least now that you have retired, you do not have to be late for work.

Thank you for sending me this answer. See you again next week in class!

-T. Donna =)

I had been late in work, it had open missed
the commuter bus of the company and
waked up too late in the morning sometimes.
>> I had been late in work. I had often missed the commuter bus of the company and woke up too late in the morning sometimes.

I had also been absent, it got my home problems and
very tired of my health conditions.
>> I had also been absent. I got my home problems and become very tired of my health conditions.
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