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Personality

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회원님의 영작문

1. Are you more introverted or more extraverted?
I am an introverted person. I like hang out with people and getting to know each other. But after meeting people, I need my own time to sort things out in my head. And I enjoy me time.

2. Do you think you have an unusual personality? Why?
I agree with this question a little bit. Often I choose something in different way from others. I think I have my own way and persistence. But I think countless peole who are living on earth now are have indiviual particularity as well. So I don't think I am very unusual. And this would be why the world is full of fun and oddities?!

3. If you could change any aspect of your personality, what would it be?

I am a flexible and spontaneous person who can change my plan according to circumstances. I just go with the flow. But It's my impression that planners are more likely high achievers than spntaneous people. And I admire them for fulfilling what they scheduled. So I want to emulate them.

Thanks♡

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Yu Jeong! ^_^
It's nice to hear from you again. How are you doing these days?
I hope you're healthy and doing great. Thank you for taking the time to practice your writing skills. I loved reading everything that you wrote here.
I'm an introvert too and I enjoy the company of my plants and pets more than the company of people.
Anyhow, I'm hoping to talk to you again next time. Take care and have a wonderful evening.
~Teacher Charry

1. Are you more introverted or more extroverted?
I am an introverted person.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I am an introvert by nature.
I like hang out with people and getting to know each other.
>> I like hanging out and getting to know them.
But after meeting people, I need my own time to sort things out in my head.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> But after mingling with other people, I need some time to process things in my head.
And I enjoy me time.
>> INFORMAL: I also enjoy my "me" time.
>> FORMAL: I also enjoy my personal time.

2. Do you think you have an unusual personality? Why?
I agree with this question a little bit.
>> I agree with this question a little.
OR >> I agree with this question a bit.
Often I choose something in different way from others.
>> I often choose something different from others.
OR >> I often choose unique things.
I think I have my own way and persistence.
>> I think I have my own way and is persistent about it.
But I think countless peole who are living on earth now are have indiviual particularity as well.
>> But I think countless people who are living on earth now have their individuality as well.
So I don't think I am very unusual.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That's why I think I'm not very unusual.
And this would be why the world is full of fun and oddities?!
>> This would be why the world is full of fun and oddities! 

3. If you could change any aspect of your personality, what would it be?
I am a flexible and spontaneous person who can change my plan according to circumstances.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I am a flexible and spontaneous person, and can change my plan according to situation at hand.
I just go with the flow.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I don't rigidly follow my plans.
But It's my impression that planners are more likely high achievers than spntaneous people.
>> But it's my impression that planners are more likely to be high achievers than spontaneous people.
And I admire them for fulfilling what they scheduled.
>> I admire them for fulfilling what they have to do.
OR >> I admire them for sticking to their schedule.
So I want to emulate them.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> So, I want to be like them.

Thanks♡
>> Thanks. ♡
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