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서비스 입니다.

(Self-introduction) Tell me something about yourself.

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회원님의 영작문

From a young age, diverse events in the global financial market interested me, so I decided to study international finance at Waseda University. After graduation, I started career in the Customer Service team at Dow Jones, where I was awarded four times with stellar customer service. Positive customer experience led to an increase in the subscription sale, which again led to considerable customer base growth. Currently, I am working as a Data Services Analyst at Willis Towers Watson and analyzing clients' data using statistical software to provide advice to clients on their market practices. Bloomberg provides a platform that plays an intermediary role between technology and clients within the global financial market. Alongside this, as part of the analytics team, I would be a user-friendly communicator by interpreting economic data to clients. Therefore, with technology and client dealing experience backed by finance knowledge,I believe this position is where I could contribute 100%.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you once again for this Aciel.

From a young age, diverse events in the global financial market interested me, so I decided to study international finance at Waseda University. 
>>> OR: From a young age, diverse events in the global financial market have interested me, so I decided to study international finance at Waseda University.    
After graduation, I started career in the Customer Service team at Dow Jones, where I was awarded four times with stellar customer service. 
>>> ORAfter graduation, I started a career in the Customer Service team at Dow Jones, where I was awarded four times with stellar customer service.   
Positive customer experience led to an increase in the subscription sale, which again led to considerable customer base growth. 
>>> correct   
Currently, I am working as a Data Services Analyst at Willis Towers Watson and analyzing clients' data using statistical software to provide advice to clients on their market practices. 
>>>  correct     
Bloomberg provides a platform that plays an intermediary role between technology and clients within the global financial market. 
>>> correct      
Alongside this, as part of the analytics team, I would be a user-friendly communicator by interpreting economic data to clients. 
>>> correct      
Therefore, with technology and client dealing experience backed by finance knowledge, I believe this position is where I could contribute 100%.
>>> OR: Therefore, with technology and client dealing experience backed by finance knowledge, I believe this position is where I could contribute a 100 percent.   

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