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What is the first thing that you notice about a person?

--> When I first meet people, I tend to care about the overall atmosphere.
I see the other person's height, body shape, and style of dressing, and then when I talk, I can see other's face.

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Hello Bo Im!

These are the basic things we see in people when we interact with them. We are automatically attracted to beautiful and organized things and turned off when otherwise. Thus, we also try our bet to look acceptable and presentable.

Thank you for this answer and I shall see you in less than an hour!

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When I first meet people, I tend to care about the overall atmosphere.
>> Correct!

I see the other person's height, body shape, and style of dressing, and then when I talk, I can see other's face.
>> I see the other person's height, body shape, and style of dressing, and then when I talk, I can see the other's face.
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