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Do you believe that there is still a chance for South Korea and North Korea to be reunited?

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Yes, I do. Our government tries to reunite both countries, but the way is quite different from Germany. I think we will admit that both South and North Korea are independent countries respectively. And then we will cooperate by helping each other. For example, North Korea has lots of natural resources and labor and South Korea has advanced technology. If we work together in the future, both countries will become one of the most powerful countries. Both countries know this potential very well, but our neighbor doesn¡¯t let us reunite because they don¡¯t like us to have the power in order to be under their power. That¡¯s why Russia China and America always bother us to talk to each other freely. And even North Korea is still under a dictatorship in a poor economic situation. They seem to be afraid of cooperating with South Korea.

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Good day, Sun Jung!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
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Yes, I do. 
>> CORRECT!
Our government tries to reunite both countries, but the way is quite different from Germany. 
>> CORRECT!
I think we will admit that both South and North Korea are independent countries respectively. 
>> CORRECT!
And then we will cooperate by helping each other. 
>> CORRECT!
For example, North Korea has lots of natural resources and labor and South Korea has advanced technology.
>> CORRECT!
 If we work together in the future, both countries will become one of the most powerful countries. 
>> CORRECT!
Both countries know this potential very well, but our neighbor doesn¡¯t let us reunite because they don¡¯t like us to have the power in order to be under their power. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Both countries know this potential very well, but our neighbor doesn¡¯t let us reunite because they don¡¯t like us to have the power, and in order to have us under their control. 
That¡¯s why Russia China and America always bother us to talk to each other freely. 
>> That¡¯s why Russia, China, and America always bother us to talk to each other freely. 
And even North Korea is still under a dictatorship in a poor economic situation. 
>> CORRECT!
They seem to be afraid of cooperating with South Korea.
>> CORRECT!

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