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Were it not for personal tastes and values, we could gain a "right" answer for everyone.
Your experience and wisdom will make you have a good judgement.
remember that the arrangement of items in a store is deliberate
I know that you don¡¯t mean to buy a lot more things in addition to your originally planned purchase.
We are sometimes shocked by our impulsive purchases.
ask yourself these questions before you make any purchase. Otherwise, you may waste all of your money.
If miners had not had air tunnel, they could not have gotten enough fresh air from outside.
Thus, miners made their own rules here. Each miner is not allowed to eat a lot of food all at once.
Right after miners were rescued, they seemed to have been bothered severely by the high heat
They had to make sensible decisions.
They only had extremely small quantities of food.
This impressive and extraordinary story ended with a triumph of engineering.

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Hi, Mina!

You did really well on your sentences! Great job! ^^

~Teacher Gina

Were it not for personal tastes and values, we could gain a "right" answer for everyone.
>> CORRECT.
Your experience and wisdom will make you have a good judgement.
>> CORRECT.
Remember that the arrangement of items in a store is deliberate.
>> CORRECT.
I know that you don¡¯t mean to buy a lot more things in addition to your originally planned purchase.
>> CORRECT.
We are sometimes shocked by our impulsive purchases.
>> CORRECT.
ask yourself these questions before you make any purchase. Otherwise, you may waste all of your money.
>> CORRECT.
If miners had not had air tunnel, they could not have gotten enough fresh air from outside.
>> If miners had not had an air tunnel, they could not have gotten enough fresh air from outside.
Thus, miners made their own rules here. Each miner is not allowed to eat a lot of food all at once.
>> CORRECT.
Right after miners were rescued, they seemed to have been bothered severely by the high heat.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Right after miners were rescued, they seemed to have been bothered severely by the heat.
>> Or: Right after miners were rescued, they seemed to have been bothered severely by the high temperature.
They had to make sensible decisions.
>> CORRECT.
They only had extremely small quantities of food.
>> CORRECT.
This impressive and extraordinary story ended with a triumph of engineering.
>> CORRECT.
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