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Musical\'s dis/advantage.

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First, advantage is we can enjoy sing and story at the same time. I think it is good for people who like to watch some story that has a lot of OST. And, because of these ost and story, some people can feel more impressive.
Second, disadvantage is can be felt not real. For example, to some people, the role of animals are people, so the reality can decrease.

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Hello, Daniel! Thanks for your effort. However, you were not able to answer the question accordingly. Please read the question carefully. 

- Teacher Debbie


First, advantage is we can enjoy sing and story at the same time.
>> The first advantage is we can enjoy the songs and the story at the same time. 

I think it is good for people who like to watch some story that has a lot of OST.
>> I think it is good for people to watch shows that has a lot of songs.

And, because of these ost and story, some people can feel more impressive.
>> Because of these songs and the story, some people can be more impressed.

Second, disadvantage is can be felt not real.
>> However, the disadvantage is that it is fiction.

For example, to some people, the role of animals are people, so the reality can decrease.
>> For example, in some musicals, people portray as animals, so it doesn't depict reality.
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