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1. What are some of the latest trends in our community? Think about things like fashion, food, and technology.
:The latest trend in our community is Crocs shoes, because the shoes are comfortable to wear. It looks good on the feet because there are various cute accessories that can be put on it.

2. Talk about a fad when you were in high school. How long did it last? Why did it die out?
: Earth jelly shoes became popular in high school. It gained a lot of popularity on SNS for its unique shape. It was popular for about three months. However, it became common and out of style.

3. The graph below shows the percentage of book purchases that were e-books from 2012 to 2016. Answer the questions
1) which category had the highest percentage of e-book sales in all five years? Why do you think this is so?
Fiction category has the highest percentage of e-book sales for five years now. You can see it in the statistical graphs.

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Hi Rian, thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin

1. What are some of the latest trends in our community? Think about things like fashion, food, and technology.
>>What are some of the latest trends in our community? Think about things like fashion, food, and technology.
:The latest trend in our community is Crocs shoes, because the shoes are comfortable to wear. 
>>The latest trend in our community are Crocs shoes because they are comfortable to wear. 
It looks good on the feet because there are various cute accessories that can be put on it.
>>It looks good on the feet because you can put a lot of accessories on the shoes.

2. Talk about a fad when you were in high school. How long did it last? Why did it die out?
>>Talk about a fad when you were in high school. How long did it last? Why did it die out?
: Earth jelly shoes became popular in high school. It gained a lot of popularity on SNS for its unique shape.
>>Earth Jelly shoes became popular in High school. It doesn't taste well compared to how it looks. 
It was popular for about three months. However, it became common and out of style.
>>It became popular for about three months, however, it became common and out of style. 

3. The graph below shows the percentage of book purchases that were e-books from 2012 to 2016. Answer the questions
>>The graph below shows the percentage of book purchases that were e-books from 2012 to 2016. Answer the question.
 which category had the highest percentage of e-book sales in all five years? Why do you think this is so?
>> Which category had the highest percentage of e-book sales in all five years? Why do you think so?
Fiction category has the highest percentage of e-book sales for five years now. 
>>Fiction category has the highest percentage of e-book sales for five years in a row now. 
You can see it in the statistical graphs.
>>You can see it in the statistical graphs.

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