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Why do you think there are some couples in South Korea that don\'t want to have kids?

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I think because they don¡¯t have much money to raise their kids. Because they are hard to get a job. And they want to have their own time to take a rest in busy days.

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Hi Yun:)

A growing number of couples who have been married for five years or less, especially those in which both partners work, are not having children. This is actually a personal choice but there are some consequences to the society, which is the decreasing economy. 

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I think because they don¡¯t have much money to raise their kids. 
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Because they are hard to get a job. 
>> It is actually hard to get a job nowadays. 

And they want to have their own time to take a rest in busy days.
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