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Why do you think there are some couples in South Korea that don\'t want to have kids?

작성자: 류*주
2021-10-06 461

회원님의 영작문

In the past, many couples had a lot of kids in South Korea.
But now, a lot of couples don't want to have a kid.
And I think there are a lot of reasons.
We have to spand a lot of times and money for a babe, but a lot of parents have to go to their work.
Before, most of families in South Korea were very big family, so they don't have to worry about a babe.
But now, most of families are just small families so they can't take care of their babe that much.
I think there are other reasons about it but I think it is the biggest reason of it.
So South Korea goverment is supporting all couples to have kids in their family member.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi John:)

A growing number of couples who have been married for five years or less, especially those in which both partners work, are not having children. This is actually a personal choice but there are some consequences to the society, which is the decreasing economy. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

In the past, many couples had a lot of kids in South Korea.
>> CORRECT

But now, a lot of couples don't want to have a kid.
>> But now, a lot of couples don't want to have kids. 

And I think there are a lot of reasons.
>> I think there are a lot of reasons.

We have to spand a lot of times and money for a babe, but a lot of parents have to go to their work.
>> We have to spend a lot of time and money for a baby but a lot of parents have to go to work. 

Before, most of families in South Korea were very big family, so they don't have to worry about a babe.
>> Before, most of families in South Korea were very big , so they don't have to worry about their babies. 

But now, most of families are just small families so they can't take care of their babe that much.
>> But now, most of families are just small so they can't take care of their babies that much.

I think there are other reasons about it but I think it is the biggest reason of it.
>> I think there are other reasons but I think it is the biggest one. 

So South Korea goverment is supporting all couples to have kids in their family member.
>> So South Korea's government is supporting all couples who are having children. 

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