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Awful world if there is not respect.

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If there is not any respect in the world, it will be very awful world. Because, if there is not any respect, the world will be full of crime and unkindness. Respect is the one of love. Love stops crime and kindness. If there is not any respect(love), it will be unkind world, then human's average age will decrease. Anyways, it will be very uncomfortable world.

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Hello, Daniel!  Your reply is the perfect answer to the given question.  Great job! However, be careful with the second conditional.

- Teacher Debbie


If there is not any respect in the world, it will be very awful world.

>>
If there weren't respect in the world, it would be awful.

 Because, if there is not any respect, the world will be full of crime and unkindness.
 >> It's because if there were not any respect, the world would be full of crimes and unkindness.

Respect is the one of love.
>> Respect is the same as love.

Love stops crime and kindness.
>> Love stops crime and unkindness.

 If there is not any respect(love), it will be unkind world, then human's average age will decrease.
>> 
If there were not any respect or love, the world be unkind, so the life expectancy would decrease.

Anyways, it will be very uncomfortable world.
>> Therefore, it would be a very uncomfortable world.
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