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What is your dream hospital to work at? Share your thoughts in a few sentences.

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회원님의 영작문

When I was a medical student, I wanted to work in my main hospital, which is one of 5 biggest hospital in Korea. Since it has a good infrastructure and system, this hospital seems to be the best place to work. As an intern now, I still agree that this hospital is a good hospital and has a lot of advantages for training. However, there are too many patients in here, since it is one of leading tertiary medical institution. As a worker, working in such a large hospital is exhausting. Each doctor has to care too many patients in a short time. Moreover, my hospital is directly related to the medical college, thus the hospital requires all the professors to make excellent academic papers every year. Since most doctors are too busy to take care of the patients, it is really tight schedule to do medical treatment and research together. Thus, nowadays, my dream hospital is much relaxed hospital, which gives doctor enough time for research and adequate numbers of patients.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there Vicky!

Thank you for sending me this answer. Your exhaustion has reach at a peak and still you sent me this- it is amazing! Well, they say the higher the quality, the higher the pressure. In life, we can choose our own poison. If you choose to have less stress, then go for the one that gives you that working condition. Anyway, there are so many ways to live life. I am sure you are up for some good challenge in your life as you are young and very smart about your field.

Choose what is best for you to love what you do. You can do your best if you are motivated and happy with your working condition.

See you soon!

-T. Donna =)

When I was a medical student, I wanted to work in my main hospital, which is one of 5 biggest hospital in Korea. 
>> Correct!
Or: When I was a medical student, I wanted to work in my main hospital, which is one of the 5 biggest hospitals in Korea. 

Since it has a good infrastructure and system, this hospital seems to be the best place to work. 
>> Correct!

As an intern now, I still agree that this hospital is a good hospital and has a lot of advantages for training. 
>> Correct!

However, there are too many patients in here, since it is one of leading tertiary medical institution. 
>> Correct!
Or: institutions

As a worker, working in such a large hospital is exhausting. 
>> Correct!

Each doctor has to care too many patients in a short time. 
>> Each doctor has to care for too many patients in a short time. 

Moreover, my hospital is directly related to the medical college, thus the hospital requires all the professors to make excellent academic papers every year. 
>> Correct!

Since most doctors are too busy to take care of the patients, it is really tight schedule to do medical treatment and research together. 
>> Since most doctors are too busy taking care of the patients, it is really a tight schedule to do medical treatment and research together/ at the same time/ all at once. 

Thus, nowadays, my dream hospital is much relaxed hospital, which gives doctor enough time for research and adequate numbers of patients.
>> Correct!
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