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Can renewable energy replace fossil fuels?

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Firstly, what is the difference between renewable energy and fossil fuels? It may depend on how quickly it will be replenished after the energy is consumed. In the case of renewable energy, it can be replenished quickly because the main resources are from nature, such as sunlight, wind, rain, water. tides, and geothermal heat. In contrast, fossil fuels are used far more quickly than they can be replenished.
Secondly, renewable energy is referred to as clean energy. This means renewables are increasingly displacing dirty fossil fuels in the power sector, offering benefits of lower carbon emissions and pollution.
Though renewables are much more beneficial, we turn to cheaper, dirty energy sources like fossil fuels.
For clean energy future, we develop less expensive and innovative ways to capture solar and wind energy. Sooner I hope renewables can replace fossil fuels.

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Firstly, what is the difference between renewable energy and fossil fuels? 

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It may depend on how quickly it will be replenished after the energy is consumed.

>> Correct

In the case of renewable energy, it can be replenished quickly because the main resources are from nature, such as sunlight, wind, rain, water. tides, and geothermal heat. 

>> In the case of renewable energy, it can be replenished quickly because the main resources are from nature, such as sunlight, wind, rain, water tides, and geothermal heat. 

In contrast, fossil fuels are used far more quickly than they can be replenished.

>> Correct
Secondly, renewable energy is referred to as clean energy. 

>> Correct

This means renewables are increasingly displacing dirty fossil fuels in the power sector, offering benefits of lower carbon emissions and pollution.

>> Correct
Though renewables are much more beneficial, we turn to cheaper, dirty energy sources like fossil fuels.

>> Correct
For clean energy future, we develop less expensive and innovative ways to capture solar and wind energy. 

>> Correct

Sooner I hope renewables can replace fossil fuels.

>> Soon, I hope that renewables can replace fossil fuels.

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