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First of all, I give the instructions to my junior engineer
in words.
And then I will confirm my instructions to him directly
If he does not understand the instructions , I write the
memos and e-mails to him again.

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Hello Jin!

Thank you very much for writing me a homework answer!

These ways below are very effective and efficient ones for someone to remember clear and accurate instructions. Your sentences are very well constructed and they are likewise clear and organized.

See you again next week for more English discussion and interaction.

Take care,

-T. Donna =)

First of all, I give the instructions to my junior engineer
in words.
>> Correct!
 
And then I will confirm my instructions to him directly
>> Correct!
Or: And then, I will confirm my instructions to him directly. (Put a comma and a period.)
 
If he does not understand the instructions , I write the
memos and e-mails to him again.
>> Correct!
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