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Honestly, I don't have any idea and interest about politics.
And I should need to some knowledge of cadidates.
But, now I'm just alrealdy busy schedule my self.
And then I don't have a time for look around the news.
I know my vote is so precious.
I'll try get the knowledge of politics.

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Hi Ann :)

Those willing to serve suggested someone may be qualified to lead. Public service is just that, serving the needs of the people above the needs of self.One must also consider, as a servant leader, if you are the best person for the job or if someone else is more equipped and ¡°meant for this hour¡± vs you. A servant serves the better good of the people, not the best interests and desires of you the candidate.

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Honestly, I don't have any idea and interest about politics.
>> CORRECT

And I should need to some knowledge of cadidates.
>> I should gain knowledge about the candidates. 

But, now I'm just alrealdy busy schedule my self.
>> But, now I'm already busy with my own schedule. 

And then I don't have a time for look around the news.
>> I don't have time to watch the news as well. 

I know my vote is so precious.
>> CORRECT

I'll try get the knowledge of politics
>> That is why I will try and be more aware about things in politics. 
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