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How did people keep in touch with friends in the past, before social networks came along? Would you

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When I was a child, I didn't have social networks and a cell phone. When I want to meet a friend, I should go to my friend's house to call him. Of course, we had have home phones, but it was expensive. I could use it. Sometime, a friend moved to other city, I didn't have a way to connect to him. Moving to other city means disconnection with friends. When I was 20, a website was popular. The web site name was 'I love school'. If I visit that web site. I could connect to my elementary school friends. If I can go to those days, I would go and I would make a web site as like 'I love school'.

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Hello Hwanny, 
Thank you for your homework! What a very interesting website that you used in the past, thanks for telling me about it, 
Regards, 
T. Angelica
When I was a child, I didn't have social networks and a cell phone. 
>> When I was a child, I didn't have an SNS account or a cellphone. 
When I want to meet a friend, I should go to my friend's house to call him. 
>> If I wanted to meet a friend, I should go to my friend's house to call him.
Of course, we had have home phones, but it was expensive. 
>> Of course, we had home phones that I could use but they were expensive. 
I could use it. Sometime, a friend moved to other city, I didn't have a way to connect to him. 
>> When a friend moved to another city, I didn't have any way to connect with him. 
Moving to other city means disconnection with friends. 
>> Moving to another city meant disconnection with friends. 
When I was 20, a website was popular. The web site name was 'I love school'. 
>> When I was 20 years old, a website named "I love school" was popular. 
If I visit that web site. I could connect to my elementary school friends. 
>> I was able to connect to my elementary school friends through that website. 
If I can go to those days, I would go and I would make a web site as like 'I love school'.
>> If I can back go back to the past, I would also make a website like "I love school". 
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