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Do you care what a restaurant looks like, or is the food the only thing you care about?

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I care about both of them: the hardware and software of a restaurant. However, I must choose one and then I would choose the quality of food rather than a restaurant itself. Visuality is like a first impression when I start to date, someone. As I get to know him more and more, I will decide whether to keep going out with him or not. On the contrary, after I know the value of the person or food, I will enjoy going out with him or will be a regular customer at the restaurant. Though the food is like the taste of heaven, if the restaurant itself such as tidiness, hygiene, or, kindness, etc. ruins the taste or makes me lose appetite, I am reluctant to visit there again. So, both of them are essential to me.

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Hi Sun Jung, thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin


I care about both of them: the hardware and software of a restaurant. 
>> I care for  both the ambiance and the taste of the foods
However, I must choose one and then I would choose the quality of food rather than a restaurant itself. 
>>However, If I could only choose one, I prefer the quality of the food rather than how it looks
Visuality is like a first impression when I start to date, someone
>>The ambiance is very important when I need  to take my date to a restaurant.
As I get to know him more and more, I will decide whether to keep going out with him or not.
>>As I get to know them more that¡¯s when I will decide if I want to continue going out with him or not. 
 On the contrary, after I know the value of the person or food, I will enjoy going out with him or will be a regular customer at the restaurant. 
>>On the contrary, if the place or a person caught  my interest then I will keep on coming back to that place regularly. 
Though the food is like the taste of heaven, if the restaurant itself such as tidiness, hygiene, or, kindness, etc. 
>>Even if the food taste like heaven, it is also important to consider the hygiene, the service, and the cleanliness of the place.
Ruins the taste or makes me lose appetite, I am reluctant to visit there again. 
>>If the place is dirty, it ruins the essence of the place and I would be reluctant to visit the place again.
So, both of them are essential to me
>>So both of them are important factors in restaurants.
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