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Who do you think is the best candidate for president in the next election?

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Who do you think is the best candidate for president in the next election?

I think that it's too early to know the best canidiate for preseidnt in the next election.
Presidential candidates have an similar approval ratings.
That's why I don't know to predict the best candidate
I'll have to keep a speech the candidate for prisident.

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Hi Monica:)

Those willing to serve suggested someone may be qualified to lead. Public service is just that, serving the needs of the people above the needs of self. One must also consider, as a servant leader, if you are the best person for the job or if someone else is more equipped and ¡°meant for this hour¡± vs you. A servant serves the better good of the people, not the best interests and desires of you the candidate.

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I think that it's too early to know the best canidiate for preseidnt in the next election.
>> I think that it's too early to know who the best candidate is for president in the next election.

Presidential candidates have an similar approval ratings.
>> CORRECT

That's why I don't know to predict the best candidate
>> That's why I don't know how to predict the best candidate. 

I'll have to keep a speech the candidate for prisident.
>> I'll have to hear the speech of the candidates for president.

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