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영작교정 게시판

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자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Which house can you say is comfortable?

작성자: 서*영
2021-10-12 215

회원님의 영작문

When I was a child, I used to stay grandmother house. Although it was very old house, I liked to visit grandmother house.
My grandmother was very nice for me.
She made me a delicious cook.
My grandmother’s house was srrounded mountains.
I often used to hear a sing of birds.
It was quite calm and comfortable place.
I loved my grandmother house.
I want to say that comfortable house is place to spending time and being with someone who I feel comfortable.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good evening Eun Yeong, How was your day? While reading your homework, it also reminds me of my younger years. It's nice to grew up with grandma, right?
Aki :)
When I was a child, I used to stay grandmother house. Although it was very old house, I liked to visit grandmother house.
>>> When I was a child, I used to stay in my grandmother's house. Although it was a very old house,  I still liked to visit her house.
>>> When I was a child, I used to stay in my grandmother's old house. I liked visiting her house.
My grandmother was very nice for me.
>>> My grandmother was very nice to me.
She made me a delicious cook.
>>> She made delicious food.
>>> She cooked delicious food.
My grandmother’s house was srrounded mountains.
>>> My grandmother’s house was surrounded by mountains.
I often used to hear a sing of birds.
>>>  I often used to hear the birds singing.
>>>  I often used to hear the birds chirping.
It was quite calm and comfortable place.
>>>  It was quite calm and a comfortable place.
>>> It was quite calm and comfortable.
I loved my grandmother house.
>>> I loved my grandmother's house.
I want to say that comfortable house is place to spending time and being with someone who I feel comfortable.
>>>  I want to say that a comfortable house is a place for spending time and being with someone who I feel comfortable with.
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