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What is your favorite Autumn activity?

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Many people go camping in autumn season and we can not do something easyly such a inside place in this pademic.
So I also like to go camping and I wanna rest with nature.
In fact, Best is the weather of autumn season here in the Korea.

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Hello there Benjamin! 

Autumn seems to be a very pretty season. Aside from the colors of nature, there are so many things people can enjoy before the cold sets in for winter. I hope that you can go camping for one more time to enjoy the company of your friends soon.

For now, thank you for writing me this answer in spite of your hectic schedule. 

Good evening! 

-T. Donna =)

Many people go camping in autumn season and we can not do something easyly such a inside place in this pademic.
>> Many people go camping in autumn season and we can not do something easily such as staying inside a place in this pandemic.

So I also like to go camping and I wanna rest with nature.
>> Correct!

In fact, Best is the weather of autumn season here in the Korea.
>> In fact, the best is the weather of autumn season here in Korea.
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