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What do you think is the best way to preserve languages?

작성자: 조*혜
2021-10-13 352

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I think the best way to preserve languages is, reading , writing, speaking everyday at least a little bit. I do the third part, speaking with PWE, but I'm regretful that I skip reading writing easily most of the days. Oh I read news articles from PWE. so I do reading.
And if I don't have time to speak in English, I try to have some moment to think in English for example imagining as I teach someone or explain something. I wish Korea was bilingual society like the Philippines or Hongkong, they normally speak both languages in a daily life so never get their English rusty. But here, if I try to speak some English to my Korean friends they'll get fazed. Having those circumstance is really important.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Min! I'm afraid you were not able to answer the question. Preserve is not synonymous with improve.   Preserve means to save something or someone from being harmed or destroyed. I wanted to know the ways to keep languages from dying. 

- Teacher Debbie


I think the best way to preserve languages is, reading , writing, speaking everyday at least a little bit.
>> I think the best way to preserve languages is by reading, writing, and speaking them every day at least a little bit.

I do the third part, speaking with PWE, but I'm regretful that I skip reading writing easily most of the days. 
>> I do the third part-speaking- with PWE, but I'm regretful that I skip reading and writing most of the days. 

 Oh I read news articles from PWE. so I do reading.
>> I read news articles from PWE, so I do reading.

And if I don't have time to speak in English, I try to have some moment to think in English for example imagining as I teach someone or explain something.
>> In addition, if I don't have time to speak in English, I try to have some moments to think in English, for example, imagining I am teaching someone or explaining something.

I wish Korea was bilingual society like the Philippines or Hongkong, they normally speak both languages in a daily life so never get their English rusty. 
>> I wish Korea were a bilingual society like the Philippines or Hongkong. People from these countries normally speak two languages in their daily lives, so their English never gets rusty.

But here, if I try to speak some English to my Korean friends they'll get fazed. 
>> However, here in Korea, if I try to speak in English to my Korean friends, they'll get fazed.

Having those circumstance is really important.
>> What do you mean?
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