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What will you do if you get infected by COVID-19? Answer in a few sentences.

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2021-10-13 334

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It is so awful when I imagined that I got infected by COVID-19. Since I am an intern in the hospital, if I cannot go to work for some days, there are big problems in the hospital. Our hospital has limited number of interns relative to the size of the hospital. Thus, there are so much work for each intern. If I am quarantined due to the COVID-19, other interns workload would be doubled, which make my reputation really bad. So I would first apologize to my collegues. If I am quarantined, I would like to spend my time meaningfully. I would first just rest without doing anything for few days to refresh myself, then start to study for an Intern exam. I also want to read some books that I could not enjoy during Intern life. Moreover I want to have time for thinking about myself. There are a lot of events in the hospital, and I feel a lot of confusion. However, there were not enough time to think about those deeply. So if I get time by being quarantined, I really want to think about myself.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there Vicky!

It's great to read from you again! This is a hypothetical question, however, as one who works in the hospital, in case you caught COVID 19, I never thought that it is so severe as the narration you pointed below. Of course, we are hoping for the best as of this point. We also just have to be ready when the virus gets us.

I agree that it would be a meaningful time to spend making yourself better while reflecting as well how you will make your life happier.

Catch you soon!

-T. Donna =)

It is so awful when I imagined that I got infected by COVID-19. Since I am an intern in the hospital, if I cannot go to work for some days, there are big problems in the hospital. 
>> Correct!
Or: ...when I imagine that I got infected...

Our hospital has limited number of interns relative to the size of the hospital. Thus, there are so much work for each intern. 
>> Correct!

If I am quarantined due to the COVID-19, other interns workload would be doubled, which make my reputation really bad. So I would first apologize to my collegues. 
>> If I am quarantined due to the COVID-19, other interns workload would be doubled, which would make my reputation really bad. So I would first apologize to my colleagues. 

If I am quarantined, I would like to spend my time meaningfully. I would first just rest without doing anything for few days to refresh myself, then start to study for an Intern exam. 
>> Correct!
Or: intern exam

I also want to read some books that I could not enjoy during Intern life. Moreover I want to have time for thinking about myself. 
>> I also want to read some books that I could not enjoy during my intern life. Moreover I want to have time to think about myself. 

There are a lot of events in the hospital, and I feel a lot of confusion. However, there were not enough time to think about those deeply. So if I get time by being quarantined, I really want to think about myself.
>> Correct!
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