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What part of your high school life do you want to repeat?

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Repeat?^^ Haha.
Actually, To be honest, I'm really regret that I didn't study hard.
I think I'm kind of smart person. But I didn't study hard when I was high school. So If I can go back to high school life I'm going to study really hard.
So I will be president of Korea.^^ hahaha....
Good night Donna~ See you tomorrow.

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Hi there Benjamin!

I wonder if you were able to meet your friend and have a quality time at 10pm tonight... Anyway, it might be foolish to wish to repeat something in the past because it will never come true. However sometimes, we just have unforgettable fun, exciting, or sweet memories we want to reminisce. 

If you want to make your past better, it is never too late to do it today. Thus, I will vote for you to be the next Korean President if I may. 

Have a great night! See you. ~

-T. Donna =)

Repeat?^^ Haha.
>> Correct!

Actually, To be honest, I'm really regret that I didn't study hard.
>> Correct!
Or: Actually, to be honest..

I think I'm kind of smart person. But I didn't study hard when I was high school. So If I can go back to high school life I'm going to study really hard.
>> Correct!
Or: I think I'm kind of a smart person. 

So I will be president of Korea.^^ hahaha....
>> Correct!

Good night Donna~ See you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
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