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What characteristics should we look for in a candidate who is running for president in your country?

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What characteristics should we look for in a candidate who is running for president in your country? Why?

I look for keeping their pledge.
I want the Goverment with strong leadership and they will keep on their pormises.
I am wathcing a candidiates, acutally I am not still sure who I should choose.
I am still have plenty of time till the next election, I ill have to think about it.

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Hi Monica:)

Those willing to serve suggested someone may be qualified to lead. Public service is just that, serving the needs of the people above the needs of self. One must also consider, as a servant leader, if you are the best person for the job or if someone else is more equipped and ¡°meant for this hour¡± vs you. A servant serves the better good of the people, not the best interests and desires of you the candidate.

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I look for keeping their pledge.
>> I look for the ones who keep their pledges. 

I want the Goverment with strong leadership and they will keep on their pormises.
>> I want a government that has a strong leaderships. Ones that can keep their promises. 

I am wathcing a candidiates, acutally I am not still sure who I should choose.
>> I am still observing the candidates. I still don't knwo who to choose. 

I am still have plenty of time till the next election, I ill have to think about it.
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