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Do you agree with Captain America\'s choices in Civil War?

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I totally disagree with Captain America, because he also is a citizen. He shouldn't judge someone's crime by his standard. Beginning of the movie, many people were died because of Avengers' mistake. So, Us government wanted to control team Avengers. Captain America denied it. If South Korea fights with North Korea, South Korea can win. But, we never try. War can be cause of many peoples' sacrifices.
I think Captain America's care for Bucky isn't good for everyone.

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Hello Hwanny, 
I totally agree with your views regarding Captain America. He doesn't care who he hurts as long as he protects his friend and that's a very dangerous way of thinking. I wish the movie was different haha. 
Regards, 
T. Angelica 
I totally disagree with Captain America, because he also is a citizen. 
>> CORRECT 
He shouldn't judge someone's crime by his standard. 
>> CORRECT 
OR >> He shouldn't judge someone else's crime by his standards. 
Beginning of the movie, many people were died because of Avengers' mistake. 
>> In the beginning of the movie, many people died because of the Avengers' mistakes. 
So, Us government wanted to control team Avengers. Captain America denied it. 
>> Because of that, the US government wanted to control the Avengers team but Captain America denied it. 
If South Korea fights with North Korea, South Korea can win. But, we never try. 
>> If South Korea would choose to fight against North Korea, South Korea can win but we never try this. 
War can be cause of many peoples' sacrifices.
>> War can be the cause of many people's suffering and sacrifices. 
I think Captain America's care for Bucky isn't good for everyone.
>>I think that Captain America's loyalty to Bucky isn't good for everyone. 
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