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Has your hometown changed a lot since you were a kid? If so, how? Have the changes been for the better or worse?

The old hometown where I used live ,when I was a kid.
Now it has been changed a lot.
High rise apartment building is built in that area. It is better than before.
When I got there, I am suprised a great development.

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Hi Monica:)

Your hometown is the place which holds countless happy memories of your childhood and youthAt some point, many things will change.  Some are good and some are bad. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

The old hometown where I used live ,when I was a kid.
>>  The hometown, where I used when I was a kid, has changed a lot. 

Now it has been changed a lot.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE. 

High rise apartment building is built in that area. It is better than before.
>> High rising apartment are built in that area.  It is better than before. 

When I got there, I am suprised a great development.
>> When I got there, I am surprised by the great development.

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