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I spent all my school days in one area and one house.
It gave me psychological stability.
My hometown remains almost unchanged.
So, sometimes when I go back to my hometown, it brings back a lot of old memories.
There are many memories in every alley of my hometown village.
When I was young, the alley was so big and long back then, but now it looks so small.
I feel strange.

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Hi Jennifer:)

Your hometown is the place which holds countless happy memories of your childhood and youthAt some point, many things will change.  Some are good and some are bad. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I spent all my school days in one area and one house.
>> CORRECT

It gave me psychological stability.
>> CORRECT

My hometown remains almost unchanged.
>> CORRECT

So, sometimes when I go back to my hometown, it brings back a lot of old memories.
>> CORRECT

There are many memories in every alley of my hometown village.
>> CORRECT

When I was young, the alley was so big and long back then, but now it looks so small.
>> CORRECT

I feel strange. 
>> It feels strange. 
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