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Name one traditional Korean dessert and describe it.

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I would like to talk about one traditional Korean dessert name is Yakgwa which can be considered as honey cookies. In fact, older people used to eat this dessert for a long time but nowadays, all generations are fascinated by watching Youtube that many famous influencers eat Yakgwa in Muckbang. Yakgwa is made with special ingredients that are hard to find so that it is considered a luxurious dessert. It is made by mixing flour, honey and sesame oil together and then fry the paste. Everyone loves its chewy and smooth texture and decadent flavour.

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I would like to talk about one traditional Korean dessert name is Yakgwa which can be considered as honey cookies. 
>>>  I would like to talk about one traditional Korean dessert named/called Yakgwa which can be considered as honey cookies. 
In fact, older people used to eat this dessert for a long time but nowadays, all generations are fascinated by watching Youtube that many famous influencers eat Yakgwa in Muckbang. 
>>> In fact, older people used to eat this dessert for a long time but nowadays, all generations are fascinated by watching Youtube where many famous influencers eat Yakgwa in Muckbang. 
Yakgwa is made with special ingredients that are hard to find so that it is considered a luxurious dessert. 
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>>> OR: Yakgwa is made with special ingredients that are hard to find that is why it is considered a luxurious dessert.   
It is made by mixing flour, honey and sesame oil together and then fry the paste. 
>>> correct   
Everyone loves its chewy and smooth texture and decadent flavour.
>>>  correct 

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