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Has your hometown changed a lot since you were a kid? If so, how? Have the changes been for the bett

작성자: 류*주
2021-10-15 239

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Actually, my hometown is the city where I am living now.
It is a neighbor city of Seoul city, so there are a lot of amenities since the city was built.
Planty of things were changed in the city, but those are just small things.
My hometown is a city, and there are a lot of amenities.
This fact didn't change and most fact about them are same as before.
Many friends talk about the change of their hometown.
And when I was a kid, I just envied it.
But now, I think it is very nice to ge my hometown as a city.
It doesn't change that much, and I think it is good for me.
Of course, there are a few problems of living in a city.
But I think we can figure them oust, and we should.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi John:)

Your hometown is the place which holds countless happy memories of your childhood and youth. At some point, many things will change.  Some are good and some are bad. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

Actually, my hometown is the city where I am living now.
>> CORRECT

It is a neighbor city of Seoul city, so there are a lot of amenities since the city was built.
>> It is a neighbor city of Seoul so there are a lot of amenities since the city was built.

Planty of things were changed in the city, but those are just small things.
>> Plenty of things has changed in the city, but only minimal ones. 

My hometown is a city, and there are a lot of amenities.
>> My hometown is a city that has a lot of amenities.

This fact didn't change and most fact about them are same as before.
>> This fact didn't change and is still the same as before. 

Many friends talk about the change of their hometown.
>> Many friends talk about the changes in their hometown.

And when I was a kid, I just envied it.
>> CORRECT

But now, I think it is very nice to ge my hometown as a city.
>> But now, I think it is very nice to be in my hometown. 

It doesn't change that much, and I think it is good for me.
>> It didn't change that much but I think it is good for me.

Of course, there are a few problems of living in a city.
>> Of course there are a few problems when we live in a city. 

But I think we can figure them oust, and we should.
>> But I think we can figure them out. 
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