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Theme : Make a sentence using the words below.
1. We're ran out of ice cream! We have to go to ice cream market!
2. Uropian's staple food is bread.
3. We like to consume money on papers and pencils.
4. I don't like realistic paintings.
5. She is going to have a laid back vacation.

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Here's your edited homework, Clair!
Thanks for sending it. Catch you next week!

Cheers, 
Jean~~


                         Theme : Make a sentence using the words below.


1. We're ran out of ice cream! We have to go to ice cream market!
>>  We've run out of ice cream! We have to go to the ice cream shop!

2. Uropian's staple food is bread.
>> European's staple food is bread. [Note the spelling of "European".]

3. We like to consume money on papers and pencils.
>> or:  Students consume money on papers and pencils.

4. I don't like realistic paintings.
>> correct

5. She is going to have a laid-back vacation.
>> correct

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