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Hello Donna!
It was nice to meet you today!
That was very great and expected next time!

I think, my weakness is Basic Grammar.
When I speak another people, I just make incorrect sentence every time and or speak only word
therefore fortunately English is fun.

please help me!
thank you,
have a nice weekend

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Hello Ethan! 

It was wonderful meeting you again in class today! I am so glad to see you here on the composition page. I will definitely help you make your sentences correct and boost your self- confidence in speaking. You just have to remember a few things: 1.) When you are talking about a finished action, use verbs in past tense; 2.) Make simple but correct sentences; 3.) Use correct prepositions.; 4.) Always answer your homework and review the suggestions.

I really appreciate your effort in answering this homework. Kindly go over the sentences and take note of the correct capitalization, punctuation, and most specially, sentence patterns.

Great job! See you soon.

-T. Donna =)

Hello Donna!
>> Correct!

It was nice to meet you today!
>> Correct!

That was very great and expected next time!
>> That was a very great and unexpected time!

I think, my weakness is Basic Grammar.
>> Correct!
Or: I think, my weakness is basic grammar.

When I speak another people, I just make incorrect sentence every time and or speak only word
therefore fortunately English is fun.
>>  When I speak to other people, I just make incorrect sentences every time or speak only words. Therefore, fortunately, English is fun.

please help me!
>> Please help me.

thank you,
>> Thank you.

have a nice weekend
>> Have a nice weekend.
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