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Many people love France because there are many beautiful places like Eiffel tower, Seine river and Champs-Elysees.
When I saw Eiffel tower on a boat at Seine river after the sunset, I absolutely fell into it.
But I was upset when they just spoke french even though they were able to speak and understand English.
I could¡¯t understand what they were trying to say.
But I totally agree that France has it¡¯s own mood that any other European countries don¡¯t have.

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Hi Jinny!
Please take note of the suggestions below.
There are parts that you need to keep in mind.
They are usually used in daily conversation English.
You can ask your questions in class.
Thanks!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Many people love France because there are many beautiful places like Eiffel tower, Seine river and Champs-Elysees.
>> Many people love France because there are many beautiful places like the Eiffel Tower, Seine river and Champs-Elysees.
When I saw Eiffel tower on a boat at Seine river after the sunset, I absolutely fell into it.
>> When I saw the Eiffel Tower on a boat at Seine river after the sunset, I absolutely fell in love with it.
But I was upset when they just spoke french even though they were able to speak and understand English.
>> However, I was upset when they just spoke French even though they were able to speak and understand English.
I could¡¯t understand what they were trying to say.
>> I couldn't understand what they were trying to say.
But I totally agree that France has it¡¯s own mood that any other European countries don¡¯t have.
>> However, I totally agree that France has its own mood that any other European countries don¡¯t have.
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