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How do you relax on weekend?

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I do relax on weekend for sleep and watching Netflix When I need.
Sometimes I need to relax for do something. But I prefer go out more because I gain energy when I meet people!

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Hi there Mun!

It's wonderful to see you here on the composition page! Relaxation time is needed by everyone. If we don't, we might get burned out. So I hope that you take some time to relax after being the most active person you can be. Anyway, you are always loaded with good and positive energy so relaxing may not take quite a long time for you.

Thank you for this homework answer and see you later in class!

-T. Donna =)

I do relax on weekend for sleep and watching Netflix When I need.
>> I do relax on weekend by sleeping and watching Netflix when I need to.

Sometimes I need to relax for do something. But I prefer go out more because I gain energy when I meet people!
>> Sometimes I need to relax to do something but I prefer to go out more because I gain energy when I meet people!
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