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What is the hardest part about parenting

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I think the most hardest thing in the parenting area waiting for our child and having a patience.
Because we already experience more things than our child, so we can get nervous if our child do wrong things or don't do very well.
Actually, I also thought that my daughter sometimes do wrong things like spilling water in the bed, of course, I think she didn't know that was not good things. In that case, we have to teach her why you don't have to do it.

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Hi Kyoung-Ho! :)

It's hard to have faith in yourself and in your own ability to be a good parent. It's particularly difficult because you won't know whether you've succeeded until it's much too late to do anything about it. This is the answer of my parents since I don't have any experience yet. Hahaha!

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.


I think the most hardest thing in the parenting area waiting for our child and having a patience.
>> I think the hardest thing  about parenting is waiting for your child and having patience. 

Because we already experience more things than our child, so we can get nervous if our child do wrong things or don't do very well.
>> Because we already experienced more things than our child, so we can get nervous if our child would do wrong things or don't do it very well.

Actually, I also thought that my daughter sometimes do wrong things like spilling water in the bed, of course, I think she didn't know that was not good things.
>> Actually, sometimes my daughter do wrong things like spilling water on the best and of course, she doesn't know that it shouldn't be done yet since she is still young. 

In that case, we have to teach her why you don't have to do it.
>> In that case, we have to teach her why she shouldn't do it. 

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