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Do you think people who have cosmetic surgery are always happy with the results?

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No one can convince that cosmetic surgery is always perfect and gives people pleasure. This is because people can not satisfy with the result and there are numerous different side effects of surgery. Thus, it results in having another surgery with the expensive costs. Moreover, people could suffer from physical pain and matters such as defect and deformity in the surgery area and get mental problems such as depression due to poor results of cosmetic surgery. Therefore, accepting unpredictable results depends on the individual with positive thinking and cosmetic surgery does not always make people happy.

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No one can convince that cosmetic surgery is always perfect and gives people pleasure. 
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This is because people can not satisfy with the result and there are numerous different side effects of surgery. 
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Thus, it results in having another surgery with the expensive costs. 
>>> OR: Thus, it results in having another surgery with a much more expensive cost.  
Moreover, people could suffer from physical pain and matters such as defect and deformity in the surgery area and get mental problems such as depression due to poor results of cosmetic surgery. 
>>>  correct 
Therefore, accepting unpredictable results depends on the individual with positive thinking and cosmetic surgery does not always make people happy.
>>>  correct 
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