¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

how to help friends

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*¼º
2021-10-18 285

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I'm help friends to speaking good.
That is because communication is very important to friends.
My second reason is when we don't communication with friends, kids can leave friends.
My third reason is speaking good is good for friends.
Finally, friends can help me too.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Joey! Thank you for answering your homework. Please take note of the corrections.

- Teacher Debbie

I'm help friends to speaking good.
>> I help my friends to speak good.

That is because communication is very important to friends.
>> That is because communication is very important to people.

My second reason is when we don't communication with friends, kids can leave friends.
>> The second reason is when we don't communicate with our friends, they might leave us.

My third reason is speaking good is good for friends.
>> The third reason is speaking well is good for friends.

Finally, friends can help me too.
>> This is a good sentence. 
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
114259 What can we do with some rocks? ±è*Àº ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 1
114258 Homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 1
114257 Monday homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 182
114256 homework ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 1
114255 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 283
114254 Homework °­*¼± ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 492
114253 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 0
114252 Stuffing and emptying ±è*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 152
114251 Homework ±è*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 224
114250 How do you think you will change in the future? ¼±* ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 172
114249 Homework ¹æ*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 194
114248 choose the correct tense of the verb ÀÌ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 173
114247 My experience ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 3
114246 Which is always the best part of your day? ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 211
114245 Are you a \"night owl\" or an \"early bird\"? Why? ye*nhi ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 184
114244 Sad ±Ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 318
114243 favorite Movie ±è*È£ ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 154
114242 1129 ±è*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 2
114241 1129 ±è*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 131
114240 If selected for this position, can you describe your strategy... ¹®*Çö ¿Ï·á 2021-11-29 368

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04