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Theme : Make a sentence using the words below.
1. My common practice is sleeping upside down. However, my mom's common practice is moving her hand during sleeping.
2. Her progress is English speaking and also Korean speaking.
3. She is screening drama in her house for her party.
4. When there's a war, you have to go to a bunker or underground parking lot.
5. I'm self-taught of Spanish and Anna is self-taught of English.

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Hi there, Clair!

Thanks for sending your homework. Here's the corrected one. 
See you at our next class. 

Cheers,
Jean~~


                       Theme : Make a sentence using the words below.

1. My common practice is sleeping upside down. However, my mom's common practice is moving her hand during sleeping.
>> It's a common practice for me to sleep upside-down. However, in my mom's case, she moves her hand during her sleep. 

2. Her progress is English speaking and also Korean speaking.
>> There's remarkable progress in her English and Korean speaking. 

3. She is screening drama in her house for her party.
>> She is screening dramas at home for her house party.

4. When there's a war, you have to go to a bunker or underground parking lot.
>> When there's a war, it's advisable to go to a bunker or an underground parking lot.

5. I'm self-taught of Spanish and Anna is self-taught of English.
>> I'm self-taught in Spanish and Anna is self-taught in English.

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