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The job I would like to have ten years from now

작성자: 김*희
2021-10-18 236

회원님의 영작문

Currently I am working at a special school as a special education teacher. But in a decase, I would like to work in a different field. I am thinking of being a Korean teacher as I have been interested in teaching Korean to foreigners ever since I was young.

So, I spend most of time studying English. It has been 6 months now, squeezing studying english in and strugging to improve my English skills.

I believe being good at English will be a great help in my career because I hope to be a successful Korean teacher who teaches foreigners from all over the world. So I believe having good comminication skills based on English is essential to running my own Korean language class in the future.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good evening Tae Hee. Thank you for taking the time to share your opinion about this topic. I can see that you don't have any problem using transition words. That's great. I helps with fluency when you use the right transition to move from one sentence to the next. Most of your sentences are almost correct. I have just added some words to make the message clearer. ^_^
T. Irene
Currently, I am working at a special school as a special education teacher. 
>>> Currently, I am working in a school for special children as a special education teacher. 
But in a decade, I would like to work in a different field. 
>>> But after a decade, I would like to work in a different field. 
I am thinking of being a Korean teacher as I have been interested in teaching Korean to foreigners ever since I was young.
>>> I am thinking of being a Korean teacher as I have been interested in teaching Korean language and culture to foreigners ever since I was young.
So, I spend most of time studying English. 
>>> So, I spent most of my time studying English. 
OR
>>> So I am spending most of my time studying English. 
It has been 6 months now, squeezing studying english in and strugging to improve my English skills.
>>> It has been 6 months now of squeezing studying English in  and struggling to improve my English skills.
I believe being good at English will be a great help in my career because I hope to be a successful Korean teacher who teaches foreigners from all over the world. 
>>> Correct. 
So I believe having good communication skills based on English is essential to running my own Korean language class in the future.
>>>  So I believe having good English communication skills is essential to running my own Korean language class in the future.
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