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Through this experience, it was found that the impact of the international agreements on domestic law¡¯s changing, and alternations in international investment and domestic law are indispensable to achieve the climate change mitigation targets.

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This situation suggests that the question of how can countries protect foreign investors and their investment under International Investment Agreements (IIAs) and enforce domestic climate regimes.

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In addition, I would like to conduct a study that allows to development of integrated standard-setting to interpret ambiguously and fluctuate concepts (Fair and Equitable treatment, for instance) under IIAs to incorporate climate change concerns in ISDs.

>> In addition, another study would be conducted to allow development of integrated standard-setting to interpret ambiguously and fluctuate concepts (Fair and Equitable treatment, for instance) under IIAs to incorporate climate change concerns in ISDs.

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