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What good advice can you give to the younger generation nowadays?

--> It is not easy to advise to the younger generation nowadays, because they all have different values.
Whenever they ask me something about marriage, buying a house, and so on, I am trying to think that I would be their situation.
As such, I advise them as reflecting my experiences.

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Hello Bo Im!
 
To be able to advise well, we need to have sympathy, apathy, empathy, among others. We have to place ourselves in the shoes of the people we give advice to because at times, it's a matter of life and death. Nevertheless, if youa re always consulted for some advice, that just means that you are a good person with wise decisions.

I am grateful for your answer. Well done!

-T. Donna =)

It is not easy to advise to the younger generation nowadays, because they all have different values.
>> Correct!

Whenever they ask me something about marriage, buying a house, and so on, I am trying to think that I would be their situation.
>> Whenever they ask me something about marriage, buying a house, and so on, I am trying to think that I am in their situation.

As such, I advise them as reflecting my experiences.
>> As such, I advise them reflecting on my experiences.
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