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If I were painter, I'll paint some beautiful photo like moon, beach, dusk etc. I think imaginary painting will be hard to paint, so I will paint with looking a photo. Not any photos, landscape photos for example waterfall, beautiful river, garden, and moonlight. I'll add something in that painting like street lantern, bridge, or people. But all of these adding things have to hang out with the landscape.

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Hi, Daniel!  Thank you for doing your homework.  Please take note of the ff:


1. Observe proper word usage.

2. Focus on the second conditional. The pattern is if + past simple, ...would + infinitive

 

- Teacher Debbie


If I were painter, I'll paint some beautiful photo like moon, beach, dusk etc. 
>> If I were a painter, I would paint some beautiful photos of the moon, beaches, dusk, etc.

I think imaginary painting will be hard to paint, so I will paint with looking a photo.
>> I think painting from imagination would be hard, so I would paint by looking at a photo.

Not any photos, landscape photos for example waterfall, beautiful river, garden, and moonlight.
>> I would paint not just any photos, but I would paint landscape photos, for example, waterfall, beautiful river, garden, and moonlight. 

I'll add something in that painting like street lantern, bridge, or people. 
>> I would add things like street lanterns or  bridges or people to that painting.

But all of these adding things have to hang out with the landscape.
>> However, these things should match the landscape.
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