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Theme : Make a sentence using the words below.
1. Today is a midweek day and I am happy and also tired.
2. There are not so many kidnapping cases in Korea because there are many CCTVs on the road.
3. There are many missing kids commertial for finding kids.
4. There are many motorists in Korea so moreover, there are many car accidents.
5. There are many school zones in Korea but there are still many cars in the school zone.

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Here's your corrected homework, Clair. 
Catch you at our next class!

Cheers,
Jean~~


                       Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.

1. Today is a midweek day and I am happy and also tired.
>> Today is a midweek day, and I am happy but also tired.

2. There are not so many kidnapping cases in Korea because there are many CCTVs on the road.
>> or: There are not so many kidnapping cases in Korea because there are numerous CCTVs on the road and everywhere.

3. There are many missing kids commertial for finding kids.
>> There are many commercials for missing kids to help find the said children who disappeared. [Please note the spelling of "commercial".]

4. There are many motorists in Korea so moreover, there are many car accidents.
>> There are countless motorists in Korea. Moreover, there are many car accidents.

5. There are many school zones in Korea but there are still many cars in the school zone.
>> There's a large number of school zones in Korea but there are still many cars in the said school zones.

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