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What do politicians usually do when election day is about to come?

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When election day is about to come, politicians visit to traditional markets across the country.
And they shake hands with everyone there.
Some politicians visit the army wearing military uniforms.
They travel across the country to beg for votes in elections, shaking hands, giving speeches, and tryng to appear interested in people.
I wondered if they believed that people give their votes to them by suddenly acting like that,
but there seem to be people who like it.
It's amazing!!

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Hi Jennifer:)

The election is about to come very soon. Political candidates are already preparing their campaigns. They have their own tactics on how to pursue the citizens. Some are effective and some are not. Despite those, we still need to be vigilant and aware of what they will do for the country. We should be wise about voting. 

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When election day is about to come, politicians visit to traditional markets across the country.
>> When the election day is about to come, politicians visit traditional markets across the country.

And they shake hands with everyone there.
>> They shake hands with everybody there. 

Some politicians visit the army wearing military uniforms.
>> CORRECT

They travel across the country to beg for votes in elections, shaking hands, giving speeches, and tryng to appear interested in people.
>> They travel across the country to beg for votes during the elections. The usually shake people's hands, give speeches, and try to appear interested to the people.

I wondered if they believed that people give their votes to them by suddenly acting like that, but there seem to be people who like it.
>> I wonder how they can make people vote for them by acting like that, but it seems that a lot of people like it. 

It's amazing!!
>> It's unbelievable. 
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