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I¡¯m right-handed person. I¡¯m pretty sure I can¡¯t do anything if my right hand hurts.
Our hands are very important because we do almost everything with our hands.
However there are some people who can do many things without their hands.
They can play a piano, they do sports, and they also can draw beautiful painting.

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Hi Jinny!
Focus on the articles for this composition.
You can apply these rules in your daily conversations.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I¡¯m right-handed person. 
>> I¡¯m a right-handed person. 
I¡¯m pretty sure I can¡¯t do anything if my right hand hurts.
>> Correct
Our hands are very important because we do almost everything with our hands.
>> Correct
However there are some people who can do many things without their hands.
>> Correct
They can play a piano, they do sports, and they also can draw beautiful painting.
>> They can play the piano, they do sports, and they can also draw beautiful paintings.
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