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What is the hardest problem you have ever faced in your life?

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The hardest problem in my life is disagreement with my boss.
In this case, I am very discouraged, impatient and angry.
Sometimes it makes the problem even bigger.
Other people seem to get along well with their boss, but I don't do that well,
so I always have a hard time.
However, I do not think it will be changed in the future because I am the type to push myself when I think I am right.

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Hi Jennifer:)

Challenges and problems are important parts of life that give you experiences, make you learn and help you to become wiser and stronger. Problems make us grow and shape us. The biggest problem people have is that they hope for a life without problems. Regardless of the result, value the experience and personal growth.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

The hardest problem in my life is disagreement with my boss.
>> The hardest problem in my life having a disagreement with my boss.

In this case, I am very discouraged, impatient and angry.
>> In this case, I get very discouraged, impatient and angry.

Sometimes it makes the problem even bigger.
>> CORRECT

Other people seem to get along well with their boss, but I don't do that well,
so I always have a hard time.
>> Other people seem to get along well with their boss, but I don't so I always have a hard time.

However, I do not think it will be changed in the future because I am the type to push myself when I think I am right.
>> However, I do not think it will be changed in the future because I am the type to push myself when I think I am right.

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