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What was the best lesson your mentor taught you?

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Hum... Best lesson......
Actually, when we worked together, I just started a developing software.
Therefore, I learned everything from him.^^
And he was really kind to me.
I believe that we can work together now, because of that reason.

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Hello Benjamin!

Learning from a mentor is vital to our professional growth. They become people who we idolize as well as respect over time.

Now, your mentor has the chance to learn from you. The world can turn tables as this. Thus, it may be good to show him too what you have learned from him and even more. Thanks for this homework! See you soon!

-T. Donna =)

Hum... Best lesson......
>> Hmm...The best lesson...

Actually, when we worked together, I just started a developing software.
>> Actually, when we worked together, I just started developing a software.

Therefore, I learned everything from him.^^
>> Correct!

And he was really kind to me.
>> And he was really kind to me.

I believe that we can work together now, because of that reason.
>> Correct!
Or: I believe that we can work together now because of that reason.
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